All Comments on 'The Piranha Spot'

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Carnal SynCarnal Synabout 19 years ago
orgasmic meltdown

Well written. Descriptive without being cliche`...I was drawn into the world of music, dancing and lust and felt the excitement and the inner battle as the girl fought her desires only to submit to them. One of the best stories I've read in a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
loved it

you are a really good writer - i felt like it was me in the story - hope you write lots more, it got me very turned on

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
nice

It's as if i could see it happening....really.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
wow!

sexy, hot, and truly orgasmic...thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Oh my god...

That was an amazing story. It was wonderfully written with plenty of spice. Thanks for writing such a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
brilliant!

very well written. the pace was perfect, i could imagine everything clearly. the story just drew me in. this is one of my all-time favorite stories. thought you should know :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hot! Hot! Hot!

I loved the way it was written; I felt like I could see it all happening in front of me. Awesome job!!

peccavipeccaviabout 10 years ago
excellent

Vivid, believable, well written story. Write some more soon please.

teresalynntwoteresalynntwoalmost 8 years ago
great work

Kept me on edge the whole way through - loved it

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