by real_horrorshow
Well written. Descriptive without being cliche`...I was drawn into the world of music, dancing and lust and felt the excitement and the inner battle as the girl fought her desires only to submit to them. One of the best stories I've read in a long time.
you are a really good writer - i felt like it was me in the story - hope you write lots more, it got me very turned on
That was an amazing story. It was wonderfully written with plenty of spice. Thanks for writing such a great story.
very well written. the pace was perfect, i could imagine everything clearly. the story just drew me in. this is one of my all-time favorite stories. thought you should know :)
I loved the way it was written; I felt like I could see it all happening in front of me. Awesome job!!
Vivid, believable, well written story. Write some more soon please.