All Comments on 'The Pool Party'

by LeCoach

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don87654don87654almost 16 years ago
Not very erotic for a "swinging" story.

Story content could have been better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Cute tail of exhibitionism

This story was fun yet realistic, IMO. The psychology of the exhibitionist reflects that of many young women, I suspect. They like attention, masculine attention.

I'd like to read more about this pair of couples.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Liked the teasing!

Something like that happened to me once. My wife's sister also loved to shoot some teasing little "Shots" that got me all worked up. Was it intentional? Only she knows.

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I began writing erotic stories in my early teens. I feel this is my calling. I try to write stories that are at least somewhat believable. I love women and don't like to see them victimized or brutalized. Yes, there are some typos and other mistakes in my stories. I'm not...