All Comments on 'The Professor and Sherry'

Either write in your own langauage or write in English. This stilted form of language is ghastly.

Somebody is a nit picker. The stilted language comes from the translation. The Author needs an English speaking editor but the story is still there.

A very naughty girl. I think everyone gets that.

I wish I could read it in the original language. It made me hot being translated, I'm sure I'd be boiling if I could read and understand the original.

Looking forward to more stories....maybe a sequel.....

FLAngel

GIVE THIS MAN A BREAK!!!!!!!!! For this authors first posted story, you people with your negative comments, really have no room to talk, I have alot of stories posted in here, and I dont see any of you having posts in here. This gentleman had a lot of courage to post his first story, and even if it was translated, I strongly feel he did a wonderful job writing this. I strongly incourage him to keep writing. so for those who want to give negative comments, be big enough to put your name in it...or dont bother at all.

Don't believe the person at the bottom. I can be a terribly picky person about grammar and all such, but this story is so hot and so charming, I can overlook it all.

Yes, a beta reader/editor would be a help, but it would only be adding polish to an already fine peice. You should be proud of yourself.