All Comments on 'The Punishment'

that was so hot! please write a "daddy" one. i think id cream myself without even touching

Very erotic and just the right side of realism, not to be

stupidly sadistic.

Well though out and very erotic. It got me excited.

That was soooo stupid. You didn't even put why she was being punished. You really need to rethink writing, so not your talent.

Too much too fast. I'd have to leave. And not come back.

Hi author

Really enjoyed imagining myself in the girl's place. Holding my own skirt so master can punish me, standing against the wall with red ass, with so full bladder that I'm almost out of control.

Nice work