All Comments on 'The Red Scourge Ch. 01'

by krojar

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Gamergirl10Gamergirl10about 12 years ago
Great start!

Can't wait to read more about Rinessa and her slave Seva! Keep it coming!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Busted Blonde

Two pretty interesting characters, you do get the feeling the elf girl's a bit of a dolt, which is cute. But your style needs polish.

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