All Comments on 'The Revenge'

For an employee to take his revenge, sexual relations, out on his boss's wife is unbelievable. For a wife to go along with something like this is just proff that she wants to fool around. For a husband to watch his wife have sex with another man, and get his rocks off, is NOT A HUSBAND OR A MAN, but a WHIMP.

Next time, try to write something believable.

Worst shit ever posted here.

Where? Certainly not in this story. To believe another man's story of what her husband wants is the height of stupidity. But, hey, it got the wussy husband's dick hard so I guess it's all right with him.

Why are all the stories from India about men who get off on their wives having sex with others.

I have yet to read a story that the husband did anything except hide and watch (from a closet, outside window, behind a bush etc.), while getting off. I just have a very hard time believing that every man in India gets off on somebody else doing his wife or girlfriend.

George

Almost all of the stories I have read authored (apparently, hard to say) by Indian men depict spineless men, Why is that?

NO A GOO STORY AT ALL>

SHIT. Indian "men" are wimp asswipes

Even as a fantasy this story fails. Both the husband and wife are fools and Matthew obviously never want to work in his field again.

SleeplessinMD

I thought your story had an excellent plot. The only reason I didnt give you a 5 was that you seemed to rush it a bit. Take your time and further explain the relationship between you and Matthew as well as the type of person he might be, so that we can really feel why he wanted to do what he did to your wife. In other words I would have liked to have know if he was a really bad guy or not.

Most importantly,I would have liked to have been brought into the seduction of your wife by Matthew. That part of the plot is really what makes a story sexy. Don't be afraid or too lazy to write a longer story.

As for the comments about Indian men being wimps or the ones about hating cheating wife stories, I wouldn't consider anyone who leaves an anonymous comment much of a man either. In fact they are probably hung like light switches.

Good luck with other stories.

fire the hubby and the dumb wife.

Good start but that's all.

I don't know if you thought this was erotic or what but I don't know who is worst you or the moronic people in your story.

plot was okay until he caught them, and instead of doing what he should have he let his rival have his wife how stupid is that,It amazis me how these wimpy guys all seem to be able to get a hard on ,so why is it then that they don,t have back bone enough to stop someone from taking there wife,I as a woman wouldn,t even want to stay with a guy who allowed me to do that,If he can,t respect himself how could I be expected to respect him,

I think my heading covered the subject. the idea that a wife would believe shit like that makes her incredibly dumb and husband incedible wimp. Author take up another occupation-writing is not your cup of tea.

the Ct. Yankee

coldass0090 is a wimp himself or maybe it's itself well whatever he has scribbled a sort of story aboput a dumb ass wimp chicken shit fucked up stupid jerk of a husband and his equally dumb ass stinking smelly cunt of a wife marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

Only a wimp would compose such garbage.

You just stood there and watched as he cuckholded you . He is righ he is smarter than you are. you got what you deserved DUMMY

but not nearly as stupid as the author... this was just ridiculous on so many levels.... the employee risks going away for rape (which yes, is what most woman would claim after this fraud), the wife is portrayed as being just a completely fucking stupid moron... I don't think the author put more than two minutes thinking that one through... and of course once again, the husband behaves like the author thinks, and does nothing, why, for what possible reason would be not tell his wife the she was s stupid fucking slut in the car? Did you even think this through?

FIRST SERVED. TK U MLJ LV NV

just another WACC story, for a wife that had never talked about or even brought up something like that. she fucks some dude and he watchs and wacks off just goes to show how many cuckolds are out there.

that is just creepy, if it is true, and it probably is, yechh

Pity

i didn't you felt that way about you're mom

Was this a story or was it just the fantasy of a cuck wannabe? Wait, don't tell me.

All willing cucks should die.

the cuck got just what he deserved.

Stupid fucking moron!!!

You left out that you had her cream pie and BTW, for an intelligent women - she knew what the guy was all about but she also knew that you were brain dead!

Michaels gone, divorce the slut and get on with life.

There are more women than men in this world, recycle.

It seems that the writers here are mainly cucks and wimps or female man haters!! the good ones are like CantBuy and any others that write about real men.

Do you really want to stay married to a woman that is that DUMB?

Is good? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Jerking off while a man you don't like fucks your wife? How screwed up is that?

Title says it all

What a wimp. He could have just opened the door and stopped the whole thing, but nooooooo.

Usually I don't argue with what authors have their characters do. It's their story after all. I'll make an exception this time. I don't like wimpy characters, or stupid ones either. He's both.

GO AND RAPE SOME BABYGIRLS PAPADAMMOTHERFUCKER

I can't understand how any fucking real man can get turned on by watching his wife get screwed by another guy. I f it were me I would have walked into that room and beat the unholy shit out of that prick but then again I suppose there are wimpass guys out there that aren't man enough for the woman they have. To them I say grow a dick and get some balls.

This guy watches from the start, he is portrayed as a,supposedly, normal and average executive with a healthy life, attitude and good wife, so...

He stands at the door watching from the very beginning and does NOTHING...seriously? This guy is a submissive, low-life loser and how the hell he is a mid company exec is beyond me. Any real company would have seen his insecurities and not promoted him and...you write him as a supervisor who is able to analyze, evaluate and make recommendations to the future of others...huh?

Sorry, I understand where you were going with this and you could have had her laid by this guy with hubby walking in at the tail end and confronting the two of them...THAT would be an educated and intelligent man!

I haven't read the story, so I am not going to comment on its merits, but I wanted to respond to your comment. You seem to think that someone who is a submissive personality at home or in the bedroom cannot be a leader in the outside world. You may not have a wide range of experience or know much about the people with whom you've worked.

I am a woman with a law degree who is a regional manager for a large corporation. I have dozens of people who report to me. I am known to be a bit of a hard-ass at work, but I merely do what I have to do to get the job done, trying to treat people with respect along the way.

For the first fifteen years of our marriage, my husband and I had an egalitarian relationship. We thought that it was the fair, modern thing to do. But then something happened, I'm not sure what, maybe it was changing hormones. I started reading BDSM stories and discovered that I am actually a submissive woman. Now I prefer to let my husband, with my input of course, make the big decisions, and I definitely let him lead in the bedroom. He is and always was, a competent, just man who enjoys the deference I now show him, and we are more comfortable in our new roles in our marriage and happier than ever. A lot of the drama I think I imagined or created is gone. I am, however, still the hard-ass at work!

Even in our limited forays into the BDSM community, I have observed that you cannot always tell who is the CEO and who is the housewife from their roles in the lifestyle. Some people who run the show all day find it supremely relaxing and fun to switch roles and let someone else safely take charge for a few hours of their life. The biggest, most muscle-bound, manly man I have ever met in my life submits to his tiny wife. They both love for her to restrain him and whip him. They are a close, loving couple who seem to have no obvious demons that need exorcising, but that is their essence: for him to submit and for her to dominate. He told us he had never had a serious relationship before her, as he could not find someone who wasn't so fearful of his looks that she wouldn't be too intimated to try to dominate him. She didn't even know she had it in her, until she met him. They bonded and complement each other.

In general, I have learned as I grow older that life isn't so simple, so black and white, as we are taught. People aren't just "straight" or "gay". There is a sliding scale of all human behavior, not just sexuality, and many people fall all along the continuum, and that includes a mixture of dominant and submissive traits, as I have found exist in me.

Many men have trouble thinking of a man letting another take his wife. But that is what almost half the men reading this category of story apparently enjoy: they see their wife for the sexual creature she is, and do not look at the world from an either/or position. They do not see, if their wife is doing something with another man with their permission, that something is being taken from them. Personally, I do not relate to sharing my body with others beside my husband. But as I have learned so much about myself that I didn't think possible, I try not to judge others. If a relationship, however two people determine it, is consensual, if both people are getting something out of it, and no children are damaged, to me, it comes under "the pursuit of happiness" in the Declaration of Independence.

Still called her your wife and not your ex-wife at the end AFC

What a wench

Pathetic.

Your mother taught your wife how to fuck and cheat. And she fucked everyone you know. hehehehehe Hope you live a long life thinking about that every day ass wipe

even get a women to get married, I feel they don't even deserve a companion ship of a female much as getting a women to get married. Bloody pussies.

He stands there and "gets off" watching his wife fuck his subordinate????

YOU PATHETIC PIECE OF SHIT!!!

Get the prick and kick his ass out of the party first and the day after out of the company and to the hospital....

The husband just watches rather than confront them as they leave?

Right??? Oh please be female and not a worthless cuck!

Please rewrite this with a second chapter and this time give it a happy ending. Consider it a writing challenge.

You're a fucking thief who wouldn't know a good story if it hit you in the thesaurus. Get the fuck off the site.

I cannot believe that these stories where the husband does not interrupt the wife when she is being screwed by someone else. I cannot imagine any husband not charging in there and thorratling the shit out of both of them!

Looks like written by some racist white guy...who probably has to work for an Indian or an immigrant...

That totally sucked. Ho! Ho!Ho! Ho! Ho! Hooooooooooooooo! Wrote that looking confident, without messing my hairs.

Fucking wimpy Cucky should be 0 stars but for average 1 star

This is so bad that I think that HDK or brooks wrote this

That was one terrible story

Awful story!

And doubly so when she saw I was citing Adultery.

She burst into our house demanding to know what this was about. So I told her.

She said "But you told him he could fuck me"

"No I did not and you would have found that out if you had have asked me." I replied.

I will fight the Divorce" she said

Don't because Matthew filmed it and sent it to me earlier today, after I got his letter of resignation."

She started to cry but it did nothing to me. I just got up, picked up my suitcase and left. As I was walking out the door I could hear a plaintive cry "Why was I so stupid?"

I answered "I don't know nor do I care."

She tried for counselling. No go

She tried begging. No go.

She tried family intervention. Once I showed the family the video it also became NO GO.

The divorce came through 6 months later and I was free. I was sad and depressed but I got on with my life.

I paid a Private Investigator (who had some very shady friends) to find Matthew. When he was located I asked for the shady friends to put the hurt on him. Best $50000 I ever spent. They not only beat him senseless but they also castrated him using a sheep castrating ring.

Matthew was no longer the cocky arrogant arsehole he had been. Especially when the shady characters said HI from me.

Yes the Police interviewed me but could not find anywhere where I withdrew money to pay for a bashing (I used a cash reserve I had built up for a surprise around the world trip for me and my wife). So no charges were ever laid.

U r an asshole

He just stood there and did nothing? She's a slut and he's a coward. Why would I want to read this again?

Just WTF. don't write anything else please. This piece of shit was bad enough.

The sequel..hubby finds the asshoke and double taps him

Serves the pratt right. Perhaps he should have stopped it instead of wanking to it! Fucking idiot!

Your resignation is not accepted. You are terminated for misconduct with immediate effect.

STUPID story

POS…another dumb cuck tale. 1 star only because I can’t give it 1/2.

Fucking cuck story, "I was jerking and I didn't know why?" Wimp!

Pathetic.

Load of bollocks, she was cheating and he was wanking over it, pathetic fucking wimpy cuckold

Stop submitting this tripe. He's watched, didn't stopi it, then complains later?

YOU sir are a cuck.

Do me a fucking favor,complete your story where the husband returns the favor.teaches a wife a lesson(after getting some prof for her dumb ass that she was set up.)how can she be so stupid without bringing this to her husband.the husband first name was never mentioned from start to finish.you have piss me and God knows how many others with this story.You get no rating,I hope there's part 2 coming so you can redeem yourself. Right now I'm just bloody pissed at you bye.