All Comments on 'The Ring Ch. 03'

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bitofkinkbitofkinkover 13 years ago
A change of tone?

It seems like there was a change of tone to the story. That the first couple chapters were more mutally agreeable - that this one is darker than the others. I will be interested to see where you go with this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please Continue

I’m glad to see you return to write more stories, please continue this series.

I would love to see him corrupt the hell out of his mother and sister

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More pussy eating

Since he has the Demon's cock, shouldn't he have the Demon's tongue? Make it a split 8" tongue that transforms whenever he has sex. That would make any woman his slut, magic ring or not.

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cindyp1976cindyp1976almost 3 years ago

you've left us hanging for over ten years what's the deal with that if you want a few tips on how to write the women's parts check out the story little red pill but please finish the story

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