All Comments on 'The Roommates Ch. 01'

Loved it, can't wait for round 2

when are we gonna get a sequel, one is needed :)

I hope you have time to write another part! very hot!!

Really enjoyed this part, any word from your editor?

Great story. Waiting and winning!

Is with my editor. It's written, but I haven't heard a peep from EndOfStory for a while so they may be busy. Please bear with me, have patience.

Hopefully I've gone slow enough for you fans of the slow simmer, but maybe not.

Love the start of this, can't wait for more! I agree with guy30, I like how you're not rushing the story. Hope to read another chapter soon!

great that you're not rushing things, but can't wait for more. :)

This was Great => cant wait for more chapters.

This is amazing writing! I love it. I'm soooo very eager for chapter 2,3,4... and MORE! Thank you for this very riveting and compelling piece. It really draws you in!

Bring on Ch2! Cant wait to see it!

Very intense story can't wait for the next part

Cant wait for the next chapter.

Loved your story,Fantastic details can't wait for next chapter.

can't wait for the next one, you left my cock straining for release

Ignore the Troll, amazing, can't wait for Chapter 2. (and hopefully more)

I expect to hear more of this story. New chapters soon please.

Very nice story. There should be a few chapters in the future :)

I agree, it was fantastic. Don't listen to Mr Crap. More, we need it soon too.

Cant wait for next part

can't wait for next chapter.

Don't listen to the troll. I thought it had a great set-up and very visual descriptions. Part 2 would be very warranted.

Dont bother with chapter 2.