All Comments on 'The Satin Planet Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Great idea. Pleasure planet. For real! To rushed though. Flesh out the scenes. Consider finding an editor. Definetly continue!! Enjoyed. Thank you:)

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