All Comments on 'The Society - Witness Protection'

Lives up to his name

Clinical, precise and brilliant .

And told superlatively. I really admire your writing, as it is succinct and you never add an embellishment that is not necessary to the storyline.

Repetitive, unimaginative horse manure. Poorly conceived, worse delivery. It simply wasn't clever or interesting - at all.

The skill in this writing is that the erotic element supports the story line and the point being made and is not a distraction from it.

The Inner Circle

In order to preserve the secrecy of a cabal, it must have self - policing and self discipline. A traitor must be punished severely and misjudgements of persons in leadership cannot be tolerated. The Grand Mistress must decree an humiliating punishment for herself for having selected an inappropriate person to join the inner ranks. The author makes this point by using erotic elements to support this message. As a good short story approaching near perfection, Witness Protection focuses on those two points, on the character of the grand mistress and on the necessity for discipline. The yarn tells alot without trying to tell too much.