All Comments on 'The Storm Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Car problems

The Honda is broke. No reference of a call to have it repaired. No reference to a second car allready being at the farm. How are the three of them getting to town????? Good story. Keep writing.

iraussieguyiraussieguyover 18 years agoAuthor
Car problems?

Thank you for the comment but I'm afraid there is no mention of a Honda in the story. Julia's car was stuck in a ditch - undamaged and quite fit for driving. Jeff towed Julia's car to the farm rather than getting out in the rain again. But I'm glad you enjoyed my story and I hope you like parts 2, 3 & 4. Iraussieguy

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