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All Comments on 'The Taste of Being Seduced'

by allen_moore

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Too many grammar issues

I finally gave up after the first few paragraphs. Sorry.

mitchuncensoredmitchuncensoredabout 12 years ago

The story itself could be good but, you are in need of an editor for phrasing, spelling and grammar.

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