All Comments on 'The Three Day Pass Ch. 17'

by JoyStick56

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rudystahrmanrudystahrmanabout 18 years ago
More

Not erotic enuf, more build of sexual tension is needed. And Joeseph needs fucked by habibi. And give a little more description of feelings and sensations. Make it seductive and sexy.

Rudy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Rudy is right, I too want more!

I want more of it . More more more! I love the story and not for just the sex alone. It is a very good picture of what is going on in the Middle East today. For too long we have suffered under an educational system that is in the hands of the clergy. But there is little we can do about it....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great Story

Not Just a sex story, but right out of the newspapers. Great work keep it up.

TherJoanneTherJoanneabout 18 years ago
At least I won't have Kassie for competition

Now that Kassie is gone---I'm still waiting in that dark alley way for you. Kissssssssss and good luck with Fazzi.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Very good

when are we going to get more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Where have you been

Great loved it

Anonymous
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