All Comments on 'The Tower Ch. 01'

Lovely start, although a little more detail would have been nice.

Not to be rude, but if you're going to criticise my writing at least have the courage to let me know who you are so I can see if you have anything that I can read to get tips on the emotions and feelings from.

Many thanks.

It is never easy to embark on a new project, let alone a new writing style, and I think you have done well with this story. I certainly look forward to reading more of it and I shouldn't worry too much about adverse comments. If they hate your work so much they should have stopped reading before the end, I always think.

Nicely done - again, thank you.

The lead character woke up in a strange place with strange things happening. More detail wasnt needed. This focused on what the character was experiencing.

I like but it appears to be the beginning of a longer work