by slave_ariana
I like but it appears to be the beginning of a longer work
The lead character woke up in a strange place with strange things happening. More detail wasnt needed. This focused on what the character was experiencing.
It is never easy to embark on a new project, let alone a new writing style, and I think you have done well with this story. I certainly look forward to reading more of it and I shouldn't worry too much about adverse comments. If they hate your work so much they should have stopped reading before the end, I always think.
Nicely done - again, thank you.
Not to be rude, but if you're going to criticise my writing at least have the courage to let me know who you are so I can see if you have anything that I can read to get tips on the emotions and feelings from.
Many thanks.