All Comments on 'The Tumble Ch. 03'

Tease.

I want to know what ideas Amy had.

Please include that in the next chapter.

O.K.ITS A GREAT STORY SO FAR ARE YOU GOING TO FINSH IT

IF YOU SAY ITS FINSHED NOW THEN YOU GET A 0/5 BECAUSE

ITS NOT FINSHED THE DADDY HAS TO COME HOME YET,AND I

GUESS HE WILL BE PART OF THAT ,UNLESS YOU WHAT AMY

AND BETH TO RUN AWAY BUT BETH IS TO MUCH IN LOVE WITH

HER DAD.............................................."R"....................................

i sure hope you finish the story it not be nice to leave us hanging

Anxiously awaiting chapter 4... Best story I've read in a while, especially since my drive has been low lately!

What is it with unfinished stories? There are so many like this UNFINISHED