All Comments on 'The Twighlight Zone Ch. 02'

Toxic males getting their comeuppance is a favorite theme of mine :D Good work here :D

That was a little dark although a good read. Also I hope you're in a better place

Viscous, cruel and sadistic.

I like this version, a lot less bleak than the original

But it would be interesting to know what happens to the characters. Is Hank redeemed?

Does Joe realise the kind of model he will end up being. I definitely want to know more about Larry's training

what a story. Fantasy, to be sure but - well done.