by Otto26
You still have a nice voice but it really felt as if you were just reading something... also the story was kinda dull.
Well, of course this is read by the finest voice on Literotica (or anywhere else for that matter!) so you're starting off with a hell of an advantage there. And it is *magnificently* read. An interesting story, too, but I think you shot your bolt a bit with the title - I think it would work much more effectively if her true nature were concealed for a while, as the story itself does this quite well.
The writing is absolutely fantastic! I really enjoyed the scenario, the personality brought to the character, and how it was all presented.
And, of course, Voyce's performance was as amazing as it always is. The combination of great talent in writing and reading has made this one of my all time favorites.
Wonderful job, both of you!
As appealing as it sounds when she asked if he could make it to the door before she bit him or asking if he'd rather serve her, if it was me I would have bowed down to her lol. I enjoyed the story a great deal, and while it sounded like you were simply reading it from the page itself, I still think it was quite good. Good work and I hope to hear/see more soon.
omg I can't believe you did that and she read it perfectly my god she is the 1 and only wicked voice