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- The Visitor
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Click hereEven after he empties himself inside her, he doesn't stop moving for several moments, thrusting spasmodically as each bit of arousal is wrenched from him. His body trembles and he groans with a deep satisfied pleasure. Finally he falls still and silent and feels the heat of her body burn into him.
"Sweet mother of Jesus! I swear I just caught a glimpse of heaven!" he says as they begin to move.
He rolls over onto his back and she eases up on top of him, resting her cheek on his chest. She can hear and feel his heart beating in his chest as his arms encircle her and lightly caress her bare backside from her neck down to her ass.
"I just knew it would be like this," she sighs. "I just knew it!"
"So did I, Princess," he answers. "So are you glad you let me come visit you?"
"Of course," she says, smacking his chest playfully. "Why ever would you think I wouldn't?"
"Like I said, I just figured that some handsome doctor type would sweep you off your feet before we had a chance to meet."
"There's no way," she protests. "I told you that once I got to know you, there's no way anyone else is going to keep us apart."
"Good, baby," he says.
"So you ready for a little snack?" she asks perkily.
"In a couple, babe," he replies. "I'd kind of like to lay here and catch my breath and feel your beautiful body a little longer. Then we can get something to eat."
"Mmm, okay. But I want you to keep up your strength. There are a lot of things that we haven't come close to doing yet, and we've got all weekend."
"Yes we do," he says with a contented smile thinking of all the fantasies and desires they had talked about exploring. "The whole weekend."
The End
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoThe Visitor starts out as an erotic couplings story that is skillfully transformed by the author into a passionate love story. The character development and plot are very realistic and true to life, but the ending disappoints only because the reader is left wanting to know what will happen for the rest of the weekend and then after that. One of the author's best submissions, The Visitor practically cries out for additional chapters. Even so, this is a five star story.
EroRdrover 14 years agoThe story is good, it did what it was supposed to do. The previous comments speak of realism that is great but it can be as real as you make it. It is just a story, an EROTIC story at that, designed to excite. That is why we read them, mind candy if you will. If you can agree with the author's intent then he/she has done his/her job and that is it. Look for serious realism in your own life. The story was excellent. Miltone ranks high on my list as one of the best erotic writers I have ever seen and that is definitely indisputable.
Anonymousover 18 years agoI disagree with the first person who commented here too. Though I don't have similiar experience, I don believe everything described here. The chemical reaction between strangers sometimes surpasses a volcano.
I also disagree that the author is tired or bored after the first stroke of the story. It was written meticulously and most of all with passion. I could just feel it. Thanks for sharing it with us. But, more pls!
Cummsweetlyover 18 years agoObviously the last person to comment, has never experienced the meeting of two people, brought together by the internet. This story is very plausible and probably happens every day! Thank you for bringing back some very happy memories for me, of such a sweet meeting, many years ago. The scene in the airport, happened exactly the same way!!
Anonymousover 18 years agoThe couple comes together just as one would expect long-separated lovers - but these people meet for the first time in the opening paragraph.
I got the feeling the author had worked up the strokes for a story, and then got tired/bored and didn't bother to finish it - which in this case would have meant make the characters plausible in at least the slightest
