All Comments on 'The Visitor Ch. 01'

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rdoolittlerdoolittleabout 11 years ago
Fine writing

I sense man on man sex coming, which will turn me off, but nice start!

briefloverbriefloverabout 11 years ago
great story

great part 1, can't wait for part 2, please hurry.

suppleWritersuppleWriterabout 11 years ago
Amazing

Great stuff - can hardly wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fucked up

Those three need to move to Syria where they’ll sort them out.

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