All Comments on 'The Visitor Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fucked up

Those three need to move to Syria where they’ll sort them out.

suppleWritersuppleWriterabout 11 years ago
Amazing

Great stuff - can hardly wait for the next part!

briefloverbriefloverabout 11 years ago
great story

great part 1, can't wait for part 2, please hurry.

rdoolittlerdoolittleabout 11 years ago
Fine writing

I sense man on man sex coming, which will turn me off, but nice start!

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