by mischif2
Dear Author,
Nicely developed story. Both characters well enough filled in for the purpose of the story. I thought that it was a stretch that Janet wore neither bra nor panties but all in all it worked.
Thank you for a most enjoyable story.
Very real to life dialogue, and well described seduction. It may have been a little over the top with Janet not wearing any underwear, but then underwear simply doesn't work well with anything but the slightest types with some dresses.
This could be developed much further as well, culminating in Janet and Jeff getting married, perhaps with a new couple starting their relationship in the same way. Bringing the story full circle so to speak.