All Comments on 'This Generation Ch. 01'

Can't wait for more.

Good start..a few errors here and there.

Couldn't get past the first few paragraphs.

Story holds promise, excited to read more.

No man mentioned, write more soon

It's annoying that you use characteristics that are deemed "white" to call the girls Oreos. Being a ballerina of color who can boast about being in a company is wonderful! It doesn't make her an Oreo. And since when is Jimi Hendrix for white people only?! I don't mean any harm. Just thoughts.