All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 08'

by dreamsofbirds

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
LOVE IT!!!!!

I was waiting for this!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
super chapter

can't wait for the next

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

fast paced and very hot!!!

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 12 years ago
holy hell

wow just flat out wow, great update, im sooo happy her baby sister kept her mouth shut, i am also hoping her brothers and sisters find their mates with Alex's family members.

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsover 12 years ago
Great job!

Wow! Loved this chapter. Hurry with the next so we can find out what the phone call is all about.

kitteh_katkitteh_katover 12 years ago
GREAT!

absolutely fabulous! I hope nothing bad happens when the phone rings!!!!

but i love it so far.

more pwease!!

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
So Glad

I took the time to catch up on your story. What a wonderful surprise this has been. A hybrid who didn't know she was a hybrid, now mated to a vamp. And what of her unknown siblings, will they discover that happiness lies w/o the doctor or will they take their sister back to the doctors compound?

The only problem w/being caught up is that now I have to wait for the next chapter. Well the story of Santana and Alex is worth the wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow!!!

Just got a hold of this story from reading another and damn!!! Can't wait for the next installment-THIS SERIES ROCKS!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
love love love!

loving these stories! More please!!

baikalisanbaikalisanover 12 years ago
Waiting...

write more :P Loving your story.

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 12 years ago
DAAAAMMMNN that was hot!!

That is all :-D

*****

lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyover 12 years ago
dreamsofbirds

Don't sweat the typos or errors. You have a gift for storytelling! Cannot wait for more, more, MORE!

celia82celia82about 12 years ago
Next????

When is the next installment due??? Please, please let it be soon!! I have never begged a writer to hurry up before; but hurry the f up!!! I'm on my knees here!! I am addicted!!

With all my love;

Celia

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

write more soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
smdh

I know u r not going to make us wait. It already over a month. Don't leave us hanging for a year. This story is amazing

faq52faq52about 12 years ago
great story.

but you really, really need a proof reader. contact me if you want.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

this is a really exciting story i love it and i cant wait for more.

chibicakeschibicakesabout 12 years ago

Can't wait for more. I love this series. I'm hoping that her "siblings" will be his siblings mates. That seems where the story would head. Great writing.

xoxo

C.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Man I can't stop reading! Damn!

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literatealmost 2 years ago

Ok girl this story is cool asf so far. Can't wait to read more.

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