All Comments on 'Ticket to Paradise'
by JonB1969
- 8 Comments
DanielOrmeover 16 years agoAs always, I like how you take the trouble to set up the relationships and give the characters some individuality. It CAN be done, even in a short story. And, of course, sexy black women with average white guys are always nice. :-)
Lyons_Denover 16 years agoReally enjoyed this story. A white guy writing from a black woman's point of view was imaginative - nice job. The dialogue was realistic, as was the scenario. I just wish the sex scene between two black women and a white guy was much longer, with more positions. It was a little disappointing after such a good build-up. Check out some of Mystery_Meat's BF/WM stories.
Anonymousover 16 years agoI gave it 100 even though it deserved a 90. This was well written and believable to have been written by an AA woman. When we finally got to the BF/WM/BF sex scenario, it was over much too quickly. I would have enjoyed a lot more sucking and even a little fucking.
Anonymousover 16 years agojust a story, but for somebody that thought a lot about someone, I think George is an ass hole. He should have given her the tickets with no strings attached, thinking long term.
imakeisabellasquirtabout 15 years agoThis story was majorly hot. Love the characters, the scenario. Great job!
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