by JonB1969
This story was majorly hot. Love the characters, the scenario. Great job!
just a story, but for somebody that thought a lot about someone, I think George is an ass hole. He should have given her the tickets with no strings attached, thinking long term.
I gave it 100 even though it deserved a 90. This was well written and believable to have been written by an AA woman. When we finally got to the BF/WM/BF sex scenario, it was over much too quickly. I would have enjoyed a lot more sucking and even a little fucking.
Really enjoyed this story. A white guy writing from a black woman's point of view was imaginative - nice job. The dialogue was realistic, as was the scenario. I just wish the sex scene between two black women and a white guy was much longer, with more positions. It was a little disappointing after such a good build-up. Check out some of Mystery_Meat's BF/WM stories.
As always, I like how you take the trouble to set up the relationships and give the characters some individuality. It CAN be done, even in a short story. And, of course, sexy black women with average white guys are always nice. :-)