All Comments on 'Time Away From Home'

You have a good story but wrong catagory instead of LW it should have been under Group Sex instead when you add other people into a story instead of just the man and wife on cvacation you change the catagory of what the stories topic is also try getting a editor or someone to check your story out before you post it.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

Picky, Picky, Picky!

Pat failed to mention that one should avoid run-on sentences wherever possible.

But not as well done. This is pure stroker material