All Comments on 'Time Stops in the Mediterranean Day 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
excellent story!

I sincerely hope this vacation is several days longer... perhaps overstepping some more bounds?

blurredblurredabout 2 months ago

My only thought on this, hot though it was. If time is frozen, there wouldn't be any lubrication. My other thought is that if while in frozen time, he squirts stuff out of the bottle, it would freeze mid air. So in my mind, he would need to unfreeze time, lubricate himself up and then freeze time. Aside from that little nitpick, good story. I love French women too.

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Dr. Max Cummings Born Maximilian Audacious Rollo Cummings on 29 April 1889 in what was then the British South Indies. Sent, at an early age, to boarding school in England, he moved successively from Linbury Court Prep. School to Greyfriars before matriculating, with the under...