All Comments on 'Tragedy Strikes Here'

A very good suspenseful story.

My head hurts.

Wow I am speechless you could say, I feel like the student who finally gets that A from the stricked professor, so Dside Thank You, I am without words. And Thank you to ChilledVodka, sorry for your head hurting though. :) Thank you both

I am impressed with this one, I have to admit the ending really got me good, I didn't see it coming and the rape was good too. I felt what she felt. Hope to see more

I thought Jeff's ghost was going to save her?

I thought your story was pretty stupid.

Please learn proper syntax before submitting stories. You use far too many comma's. You need some help on spelling and sentence structure. You also need to work on transitions from scene to scene, and descriptions. The anal rape scene read the same as if you were describing someone going to the store to buy some milk.

You have a decent idea, it just needs some work.

The story itself was ludicrous, the writing was atrocious, and it didn't make sense at times.

You now have two options; One, practice, practice, practice; Two, never write again.

I suggest the latter.

Just no.