All Comments on 'Training Him to Take Dick Ch. 04'

i cant wait for 5 i check it every day for the conclusion this is the best story on literotica

Hey when is 5 coming im so excited to see ho micheal takes a dick

this is a great story!!! I have wanted to do most of the things described in here. I have done some, such as the spanking. i cant wait for the next part in the story. Good job!!!

Although I don't really get into the whole mom/queen/magic thing, the rest of this story is so hot that I couldn't stop reading it... I can't wait for 5, want to hear about Michael taking his first dick! Forced bi and forced cocksucking is actually my biggest fantasy, and to read it explored in such loving detail is a treat! Let's see #5!

thank you! thank you!! thank you!!!

Series started off good with the first 3 chapters but seems to have jumped off the tracks a bit with the storyline in which it started. Hoping it gets back to the original core story in the next chapter. Also a lot of wet play in this chapter than in the first 3.

the first 3 chapter were good, a little over the top(why would the guys stick around?)

Then this chapter just show 3 VERY dysfunctional families

I would travel to the other side of the world to be with you as I have never read anything in my life like that as I so want to give up my life too you...

Well, way too many people involved to count as to who was doing what to whom? I could not keep track and lost interest as there was no longer a central theme to whatever training who was doing to whom. Sorry, it lost me. The other chapters were good but this one just had too many people involved.