All Comments on 'Tricked By My Own Daughter! Ch. 01'

This story has a great deal of potential to become a good series, but this first offering is far too short and feels rushed. The very title gives away the secret, so leaving it as a "twist" for another chapter seems pointless. But, again, it has potential, and I'm interested in seeing what happens with future chapters.

God, what were you thinking, posting that inane whatever it is on here????

Extremely boring - why bother writing it ?

Give it a chance. Good start, but it was a bit short. Ignore all the 'know alls' carry on and don't rush it. Theres loads of scope for this story.

It ha spotential. I don't mind the quickness of the story, there's always room for a quickie ;)

Should have renamed it though, there's ne suspense when the title gives it all away :/