All Comments on 'Tricked By My Own Daughter! Ch. 01'

It ha spotential. I don't mind the quickness of the story, there's always room for a quickie ;)

Should have renamed it though, there's ne suspense when the title gives it all away :/

Give it a chance. Good start, but it was a bit short. Ignore all the 'know alls' carry on and don't rush it. Theres loads of scope for this story.

Extremely boring - why bother writing it ?

God, what were you thinking, posting that inane whatever it is on here????

This story has a great deal of potential to become a good series, but this first offering is far too short and feels rushed. The very title gives away the secret, so leaving it as a "twist" for another chapter seems pointless. But, again, it has potential, and I'm interested in seeing what happens with future chapters.