All Comments on 'Turpitude'

Parts of page 1 are not set correctly, as of 12:05 EST October 4th. I would write to Laurel on this one, this story deserves the best!

Great job, Absy. You've always been twisted and I'm proud to call you friend. Brilliant turn of events and a wonderful POV. I can only say that I wish you would write more.

the story. Revenge can be sweet. My only problem was the way you set it up with everything centered. For me it makes it hard to read. But I loved the imagination and the story line.

Very different.

Loved the POV. Both dark and uplifting at the same time.

Well done.

Abs

What can I say... there are no superlatives sufficient for this one... Loved it from start to finish!

Great job, skank! *kisses* ~Imp

Super story, kiddo. Dark humor pushing the horror along. She-demon is wonderful. Great last line. Kudos, dark one. esl

Good story Abs. Proud to know you.

I give it 5 'snaps'.

I loved this story, lots of humor! A great spooky read!

Loved the characterization! The sarcasm just tickles me. Very tight story, well done, impressive. I'll remember to wear clean underwear. :) Good luck!

Utterly evil my dear. The time shifiting was a little off, but since the main character says it was "off" for her because of her "state" it worked. More than made up for it in the places I laughed out loud.

You had me from the opening line. The humor makes the horror etheral. Good read, great fun.

Great story, Abs. I spotted a few typos and other such but not enough to be a problem. I loved the way it started and the suspense and, especially, the way it ended.

Great job, Abs.

This was a great tale, Abs...I loved it!

~Honey

That was a wonderful read Abs; I was hooked from the beginning. The work you put into it really shows. Good luck!

Cookie :)

I liked the character's sas. You obviously put a lot of thought into the plot.

Abs, that was a great story, wonderful plot, with just the right amount of sex. Keep up the great work

strikes again. LOL I utterly loved this story.

The she-devil was a nice touch.

And you wrote a fitting end.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

More! More!

Very nicely written. Shades of The Dark Tower when Detta gets raped by the demon in the circle.

A story of dark, cold revenge -wonderful, very, very you.

It had a good beat, was easy to dance to, I gave it a five.

Rumple

Dear God! Why haven't I been reading your stories before? I never expected that you'd write a horror story this powerful, Abs. You have adapted it to your own style, and it comes out being different, yet so 'you'. I'm amazed at your talent.