All Comments on 'Tutorial Ch. 02'

I'm grateful this story is over and I see they were written in the early 2000 so I will not be reading any more stories like this. I have only one observation and comment to make. Number 1 it was not erotic at all to read. Secondly, I was hoping that this idiot would get some balls and deck this knuckle head.

Great story. I'd love to hear more

This has been a great couple of chapters and I think you for posting it here for everyone to read. With the high marks your story has received, I am sure that everyone would love to see many more chapters. I know it has been a couple years since you posted this but please add to this story and post it here.

Please continue writing, I've read ot several times and I'm dying to know what will happen next...

part 3???? wtf!!!

Hurry up with ch 3. Please don't lose focus on Bonnie's personality and that she is an asian foreigner. Its more fun if she simply keeps him off balance, dragging him in deeper.

part 3?????????

to learn more about Bonnie's tutorial. I hope it won't take too long before you publish Ch. 3.