All Comments on 'Twelve Gates Ch. 03'

He is drawing her in step by step.

Great mind play.

Thank you and please keep the chapters coming - this is really good stuff!

He is the perfect mix of stern but seductive. She is insecure but brave. The two if them together are perfect. Looking forward to more.

I've been following this story since the beginning, but may I say this chapter is so damn hawt!!

Love this so much, thank you for sharing this with us.

Can't wait to see where this story goes,

5 stars from me and thank you!!!

I agree with the previous comments. The way you have Grey being slowly drawn into the lifestyle makes a great read. Please hurry with the next chapter!

Even though my body looks very different than hers I can still completely relate to her. The excitement and fear of exposing yourself to a man for the first time. Great writing on making it so real and able to relate to!

im loving it so far

... and totally hot! Very realistic and well written.

How did I miss this story? This is a wonderful story and feels so real...your ability to share her thoughts, emotions and fears incredible. I love how Robert is brining her along through with warmth, playfulness and quite domination.

Thanks for a wonderful story - I have lots to catch up on

Well written and very sexy.