All Comments on 'Twisted Night'

I think this is a wonderfully sexy story. But I feel as if the end is missing.

You kind of left me hanging in the air. What's with this man?

and here I didn't think CT could be sexy..

can't wait to read more.. simply beautiful.

Your story was good, but a problem you might want to look into was your over-use with the word "I". It just gets a bit repetitive.

Other than that, good story. =)

The writing is a bit clunky and the storyline is painfully repetitive. Some of this story is hilarious. For example, they're both wealthy yet we're constantly told he wears Curve cologne which not only smells like a teenage boy but costs less than $20 at Wal-Mart? It's just not believable but it is ridiculous, if that's what you're going for. When developing a character, really think your choices through and make sure they're consistent with what you're trying to convey.