All Comments on 'Under the Bleachers'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Excellent 1st effort...

I enjoyed it very much!

Hope to see another post from you soon.

NookiehunterNookiehunteralmost 18 years ago
Fucking with the Enemy!

This is a very good story. I played high school football and remember a similar occassion with a member of the oppositions's student body. We met and made love and no one was talking about it on Monday morning. It was great!

Nookiehunter

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
i liked it

i look too see more from you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
2?

I would LOVE a sequal! Excellent job on the first!

bubbliebabsbubbliebabsalmost 17 years ago
Loved it!

Awesome story! Can't wait to read more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I have been in this situation...

Having played football for all four years of high school, i have seen this happen and been involved in it. Right on, loved the story. perfect imagery, wonderful extraction of their emotions... utterly perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

i think that my baby sitter Kara

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