All Comments on 'Under the Bleachers'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

i think that my baby sitter Kara

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I have been in this situation...

Having played football for all four years of high school, i have seen this happen and been involved in it. Right on, loved the story. perfect imagery, wonderful extraction of their emotions... utterly perfect.

bubbliebabsbubbliebabsabout 17 years ago
Loved it!

Awesome story! Can't wait to read more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
2?

I would LOVE a sequal! Excellent job on the first!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
i liked it

i look too see more from you

NookiehunterNookiehunteralmost 18 years ago
Fucking with the Enemy!

This is a very good story. I played high school football and remember a similar occassion with a member of the oppositions's student body. We met and made love and no one was talking about it on Monday morning. It was great!

Nookiehunter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Excellent 1st effort...

I enjoyed it very much!

Hope to see another post from you soon.

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