All Comments on 'Unexpected Turn of Events Ch. 17'

u r so back! many thanks! twin power!

OMG! It's about time! I was beginning to wonder if something had happened to you! I love this story and already can't wait for the next chapter. I do however suggest that you get an editor, I think with some editing that this would be the best story ever!

i loved the chapter but you picked a heck of a place to end you have got me hook line and sinker please post as soon as you can

thank you for posting the chapter was excellent

wooottt yay!

u also might wanna update the ch from 7 to 17

You would think that izzy would want to mate with Owen and be changed, what better way to help guard her sister and kick butt than to become a wolf, the extra senses would be of so much help. Plus we know she loves him. Love Cullen and Angel to bits can't wait til they catch those responsible. Why didn't she tell Cullen about the laugh she heard when she was trapped. Also loved how Cullen's horse saved her in the last chapter thought she would have gone to the stable to thank him with a treat.

Why is Cullen even allowing the three bitches to stay in the pack. He is the Alpha and his mate is the Alpha bitch yet these women can say what they like including wishing their unborn ill. Why have they not been exiled from the pack? The Alphas don't seem to get much respect from anyone in the pack right down to the old biddy that slapped his face. Izzy is also really starting to piss me off with the way she treats Own when all he want is to be allowed to love her. Does she even care how much she is hurting him with her rejection?

you got me hooked more more more

i want more.

I need more...sighs I hope the wait for the next chapter isn't long... hehe I think Owen is about to stop being so nice :)

I love Izzy & Angel's relationship with their mates. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I was just so happy to see that you posted another ch. You are truly a Bad_Girl.

Once again great chapter and well written.

I do hope that Owen and Isobel can sort out their differences soon. They should be getting closer and not this constant bickering. I hope that Cullen and Angel can catch this one causing all the problems soon. Write a new chapter soon please.

Loving this story and so excited to see this update.

Don't put yourself under to much pressure. The story will come together when the time is right. And although we your fans cry for the next chapter constantly, we would never be happy with a chapter that you rushed just to post. I like to think most of us are smart and we all know life has a way of getting the way. Just know you won't be abandoned if you're late posting a story.

You have totally thicken the plot. The daughter killed the father. She failed to kill Cullen. Now her only choice is to go after his one true weakness Angel. Girl you are so rock'n this story. As if that isn't enough, Izzy and Owen seem to have taken a step or two closer to mating. I'm so glad to hear the next chapter is half written because I have to say" can't wait for the next chapter, please hurry" hehe-he

p.s. thanks to your "you know who you are" they did a great job too

we have missed you.

*****

lovely update! i can't wait to see what the twins do to finally get rid of those twits!!

I am just in love with Isobel!! I can honestly say that she is my favorite character out of them all! I would really, really, *really* appreciate it if you made another story, but about Isobel and Owen this time. I am *not* above begging, here!

I thought that this chapter was great, just like all of the others! ;)

We certainly miss your wonderful writing skill. Glad you are back!

I hope Isobel and Owen stop butting heads long enough to have a meeting of minds! Then together they may just prevent Angel from being killed!

cant wait for more....

I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL YOU UPDATE!

I wanna see Isobel make Owen grovel a little bit more but I also want Isobel to give into Owen!

Ahh I can't make my mind up.

So glad Angel and the little'un are fine.

Sorry to hear of your difficulties but am so glad your well over them and chapter 18 is coming soon, i love your writing.

izzy kicked butt them gurls aint all human lol. watg next DUN DUN DUNNNN!!!!

OMG OMG this is one of the best i have read .. PLEASE continue

Didn't Cullen know where Angel was after reading...

"We also need to keep a closer watch on Angel until this is solved."

You would think his betas were in place to keep watch over her.

BTW it is...will not see the light of day NOT day of light as you wrote when the mystery nasty was talking about their intent for the child.

Just found this story today. I wasn't able to stop reading until then end. One of the best I have found on this site. I laughed during each new chapter! Am truly enjoying these. Keep it up!

I discovered this story today and i'm hook. Please continue with the story

Izzy has remained my favorite character throughout the story. Cause she can kick butt! And she never ceases to make me laugh. Anyhow i wonder what the child will look and act like. I think that it would be funny to see cullen falter if he looks at his mates eyes transferred to the baby. "Snicker"

This is great plz write more this is the best story I have seen ever and I really want to know what happenes please continue it is amazing

PLEASEEeeeeeeeeee!!!

you are the first writer i check to see if any new material has come in. I'm loving this book-you have such potential. Please keep writing!!!

I ABSOLUTELY love Gavin and his remarks to Cullen. :)

BTW-Keep up the good work.

Editor? It seems your so called editor is lacking BIG TIME! Your writing has improved some but not much. I am however happy with your plot with Angel. It took damn near the whole story but she has come out swinging kicking ass and taking names later which I like. I have not rated your story yet because of all the writing issues that you have not really seemed to address. I have noticed that you always put a note however you have never addressed the issues that people are stating that you are using a published authors work and that your writing mistakes are driving people crazy. WHY?

Also I have noticed that you use tons and tons of filler words to try and make the chapters longer.WHY? I have also noticed that you repeat a lot of the same things that you said in one sentence and repeat in the next. Who ever your editor is I hope to GOD you are not paying them. Because it seems that they are like you in writing and are not catching the mistakes. Now back to rating if I was to do so @ this point I would only give it a 2.5 only because of things that should have gotten better by this ch17 haven't and it seems not to be. Also I would suggest that you do a revamp of the story and do a serious CLEAN UP and repost it on here and see what you get in ratings. Last but not least, the sex could have been more spicier and I feel that you lacked in that department also........

I am so loving this story!!!!!! I really do feel for Owen...

Hey, love the story. Just wandering when the next chapter is coming out?

while not as good as the chapters should be, now that you have the help of an editor, they have made a huge improvement. if you would go back and re-write all but chapters 16 and 17, you'd improve the story greatly. rewriting 16 and 17 would help, also, but they are worlds better than the first 15.