All Comments on 'Unforgettable'

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stillstrokinstillstrokinabout 14 years ago
Great start

Written as if it were a recap of an actual happening. If it's fiction, it seams real. If it's real, it seams exciting. Keep writing, I know you'll get better as you write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
loved it

yes continue this story i loved it

lost_in_youlost_in_youover 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

to everyone who has taken time to read and vote on this chapter of Unforgettable! You're amazing!

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 11 years ago
Excellent command of language!

Don't stop now....:+))

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