All Comments on 'Unrequited Love?'

The only explanation is that someone has deliberately driven it down.

It is a loving story--Possibly though it belongs under romance

this is more like a horror story than a erotic story i lked the romantic side but wheres the in depth sex session!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

no need to waste any more words.. its boring as watching paint dry

scores to people or stories he reads and then tells us he hates them. He must be a rejected retarder asshole . Yep, he is.

I loved reading this story, it is a great tale. I just wish it was longer but that does not take away from how good it is.

After ten years it's probably unlikely that you'll read this comment. However, if you do... This is a well-written story and I've given you five stars on that basis. However, given the serious tone of the story, I think that it's far too short, abrupt almost. With a bit of careful planning, character building and drama you could have run to several pages (this site sized pages) and the tale would have been all the better for it. As it is, Mya and Sydney are little more than cardboard cut-outs whereas they could have been fully rounded and believable characters.