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A taught, well-written fantasy. I hope you continue writing and posting.

nice first submission....hope it continues...

What a waste of time. All expectation, and no substance

and of course, I like that it's set in the city in which I grew up. Just a couple of wee quibbles: it's Charlotte Square, possibly the finest Georgian square in the world.

And a malt is whisky. Whiskey is not distilled in Scotland.

Keep writing. And have a look at my stories if you appreciate writing about Scotland.