by xshadowedeyesx
I'm gonna go back now and read but I just had to lavish praise on how it starts before I even read the entire story. Finally a writer who understands the need and value of dialogue to bring a scene alive. Right off the bat the dialogue is hot and gives an erotic, electric charge. 9 out of 10 writers seem incapable of getting this simple premise. I can skim a story and immediately know if I'll dislike by seeing no character dialogue and only writers boring redundant descriptive prose, if you could call it that. Ok rant over.