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All Comments on 'Vacation Reward'

by kristin_hip79

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
good start

good start, now finish it, seems like you both will have a great time, will look forward to your next installment of your story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
needs fixing

You need to proof read or have someone do it for you. There are so many mistakes and errors. So if you want people to read your story then do as I suggested and get a proof reader.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
excellent start - can't wait for the next chapters!

excellent start - can't wait for the next chapters!

JennaLoveJennaLovealmost 11 years ago
Amazing

Great story! Pleaseeeeee continue asap!!!!! So eager

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more

Can't wait for what's next

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hmm

was 2 short of a story looking forward 2 the rest of the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More.

What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More!

I would love to read more. Great story

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