All Comments on 'Vegas Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very good

it's cool, narrating and still promising after 4 chapters.

I like it very much. Just don't wait too long with the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

This is so good. It's such a good story line, with a touch of suspense not knowing what is coming next, and some steamy sex scenes. More please!

BrownCuriousityBrownCuriousityalmost 16 years ago
very enjoyable...

The scenes are really hot. Can't wait to get to the next chapter.

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