All Comments on 'Vengeance'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Stupid people do stupid things.

This is one of the most immature I have read. The insurance company would be more interested than the owner in finding who did this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
why would dumbass have someone else fuck her

it ever fails,just can't help themselves.always share their women.cockold is in the make up of white men.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
ok

I dont bye the whole cuming over and over thing though.

8scoops8scoopsalmost 15 years ago
too much of a good thing...

I really liked this story til about halfway thru the sex. All that cumming seemed unrealistic and got pretty stale. And it needed more of an ending, but I liked the premise and it was better written than most that I've read. I'll be looking for more from you.

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
You Almost**

Had a story and then you got goofy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
DID I MISS SOMETHING?

This guy is a federal agent? Maybe his buddy is guilty o destruction of private property but he's guilty of extortion and rape by theat. Don't like this piece at all. And why does he have to have another guy there to fuck the girl he's been lusting over for years? Sorry but that bit made no sense whatsoever.

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