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All Comments on 'Washstone National Park Ch. 01'

by ridan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Sweet mystery

Leaves you wondering what /who will come next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I started and it had potential...

But I stopped when you switched from third to first person from one paragraph to the next. Either way is fine, but stick with it once you start.

DJ

smithE101smithE101over 13 years ago
great start

really excellent opening chapter. can't wait for the followup

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Hoping for more

Great start. I liked the power imbalance created by her seeing the boys naked while she was clothed. Hoping for subsequent chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
continue

plz cntinue the story dude.

nice start.

put up ch.02

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