by irxgbr
Stories are good, but the word "defiantly" is used in the wrong way. Also used way too much and possibly misspelled.
Well what now oh deviant one - lets tick them off - big black cocks, whipping, gangbang, two cocks in pussy and asshole wow - gee girl friend to a normal whore in two weeks eh.
Ah, just stretch it!
You do nothing to correct the errors pointed out by previous comments !! Punctuation,grammar and diabolical spelling make reading your story hard and frustrating work. Do something about it. Please?