All Comments on 'What If? Ch. 08'

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Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Great story

This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories on here. As much as i would like a longer story, they come out every day so it just builds suspense waiting the time till the new one comes out. You leave the chapters off at very dramatic times. VERY nice job.

northlander almost 13 years ago

Keep it up Paul

Paul, this is a great story. Really enjoyable, thanks for the read

LoneStarRider almost 13 years ago

Oh, wow.

Okay, the dream sequence was just plain freaky.

Excellent writing. And Alexis is, indeed, in dire need of....medication.

Latinlover15 over 11 years ago

Damn, that's one psycho bitch..

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I am working on a few stories, including a draft of a seemingly long-awaited sequel to my summer camp story. Stay tuned, and as always, feedback is appreciated.

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