All Comments on 'Wheeling Park Ch. 05'

Loved it, please keep it going.

I can't believe how much I'm looking forward to this story. I read it first thing in the morning, and I hate waiting the rest of the day for the next installment. PLEASE keep it going.

It's a scorcher! I took a while to get to the juicy parts and the incest. Well done. Definite highest possible voting score.

I find myself really enjoying this story. It started out slowly, but has built into a very well written, hot version. I am really looking forward to the next chapters.

First of all, excellent written, good depth of characters and nice slow buildup up until this point.

But, hmm, I get the impression you quickened the pace and the transition to the juicy parts in favor of a believable transformation.

The mother making out in a public place, the daughter admitting wanting to see her mother suck cock, where the hell does that come from, :), not to mention the lesbian incestuous threesome.

Looks to me, despite the no-drugs appeal, something must have been in the beer, they consumed, ;)

But nevertheless, I've very much enjoyed reading this series so much and you definitely are a gifted writer, so I'm expectantly looking forward to the next parts.

Thx very much for giving ungrateful whiners like me a good time, :D

Great characters, nice story and a lot more to read.